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Sorry, but not sorry. meh. I wish i had time to write more right now. I will add another chapter soon. I promise that it wont have anymore gross bleh stuff like this....

its been a rough day for everyone. sigh. enjoy..

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chapter three : [link]
Chapter five:
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-PLEASE NOTE- I am not a big fan of my work being stolen. If any of you other dA members out there can please respect this piece which I have been working long and hard on that would be wonderful. Taking MY story line and idea and merely twisting it around gets under my skin. This is in a way a story of myself, but with Chief and Toph and avatar world. Why can't you just create your own idea, call it yours and be merry. Words to consider. thanks. -END OF NOTE-

I am more than happy to help others with coming up with ideas for their story or anything else. Just think twice before you take anyone else's story and just simply rearrange things a bit. I would love to help you write your own.

- StealingN.
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This chapter was absolutely riveting. I can only imagine Toph's fear for Lin after that last comment Marc made before leaving her. It is very believable if Lin survived some hostage situation as a child and didn't want to have children for that very reason. She didn't want them to be a target for ransom if she were Chief of police because that love for one's own child can be so powerful and overwhelming.

I have one question though, what material was the necklace Toph was wearing? Couldn't she have metalbent that with her face, like how Bumi metalbent shingles to free him from a hanging cage in his escape from Fire Nation imprisonment in Omashu?